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K**L
Finding love in the real world
Let me begin by saying I am a huge fan and have LOVED every book Portia has written. Each book is so good you never want it to end. This book has a wonderful story, Madison's story is real and unfiltered, not the storybook romance. However, there are quiet a few grammatical errors that did annoy me along the way and I felt like parts of the story were left out of didn't flow. The ending is shocking but left me with questions about others parts of the book that made me think it didn't follow what has been given to the reader prior. I have already preordered book 2 and look forward to more of the story. As stated, I am a huge fan but felt like maybe the editing on this one could have been improved.
R**M
Amazing truly amazing
I have ready many books by this author and there is one weird i can always use to describe them...captivating. This story captivated me in a way that truly surprised me. The main character being relatable and enthralling. It was so easy to step into her shoes. I feel like anyone could have and have had the same feelings and direction this character takes due to the boulders life has thrown at her. Situations i feel many people can relate to. From chive to cover i could not put this down . the family dynamics, friendships, work relationships and life experiences made me feel like i was right there. My heart soared when theirs did my heart shattered with them the back and fourth made me laugh and smile. Oh and the steaminess ladies grab your wine and this book. All around a amazing creation from an amazing author. Grab this one asap.
L**.
Honest Review
I received this book for my honest review. Honestly, I thought the story was great! I really thought Madison was a selfish, self-centered female, and that feeling didn’t change much after finishing the novel. That doesn’t mean that the story wasn’t good, because it was. This character was realistic, and so were her feelings and behaviors. I get tired of characters who start out horrible and then all of a sudden they turn into these great wonderful people. That’s not real life.I won’t spoil the story but the ending was great! This rivals her If I break series for me in terms of being shocked by the storyline. I cannot wait to read the sequel as I HAVE to know how the Madison/Alex/Jackson story ends.
L**4
ended with a weird cliffhanger
I loved this book until the very last page. I didn't know I would need the next book to find out what happens, so I was incredibly disappointed. Madison broke up with her safe boyfriend. There was no spark, and she recognized she needed more. Then she became involved with a very passionate older, rich man that made her discover feelings she never knew existed. Once he broke her heart, she developed a friendship with a bartender and their relationship slowly developed into much more. I thought Madison had finally found her HEA but....to be continued. I really loved the story but the ending had me annoyed enough that I won't be reading the next book.
K**R
Confused
Ok apart from some minor errors like cooking ground beef in 1 paragraph and stirring turkey in the next. I would like to know how is it that Madison had dinner with Alex's parents and at the end is introduced to Jackson as Alex father
A**E
Confusing and details not accurate - usually I love this author, but this book is a hard pass
While I normally love everything Portia Moore writes - this was by far my least favorite - first off I thought this was the sequel to Her so for about 25% of the book I was trying to figure out what role the characters played in regards to the characters in HER so I was mildly annoyed and disappointed from that - then there were so many typos and name errors to start off with and finally I was so confused in the end - unless I missed something I thought they went to meet Alex’s parents so when his father was someone completely different in the end I was even more annoyed - I feel like this book was haphazardly written and not with the normal care in how Portia normally so delicately spins her stories and while I will keep reading what she writes - I hope this is not her new style
S**R
Hooked
Every chapter was a new adventure. I didn’t wanna put it down! Definitely start the series if you’re considering it.
C**O
Addicting
I absolutely love everything that this woman writes. Collided had me hooked from the beginning. I could not put this book down until the very end, and I am now anxiously waiting for the next one in the series. The next book can't come soon enough.
F**N
It's Not without It's Mistakes
I liked this story but it's not without It's mistakes it's not just grammatical errors it's calling characters different names then they started out with for example Alex's sister started out as Alyssa and ended up as Tiffany and a waiter named Orlando ended up as being called Oliver and in another scene Madison was called by her sister's name. It's the most errors I have read in one book It definitely needs good editing Portia's books are normally very good so I don't know what went wrong with this one. I couldn't take to Madison as a person or drum up much empathy for her situation but despite all of that I enjoyed the storyline. It ends on a cliff hanger and how I predicted it would so no surprise there then. the sequel isn't out until early next year so quite a while to find out what happens next and hopefully less errors.
E**L
Brilliant storyline.
I started this book thinking it was the exact same story line as another of Portia's books with the rich man sweeping the girl away etc I stayed with it and glad I did. It changed and the story line was Brilliant! Hooked and am deff reading the whole series. If you can get passed the confusing errors such as name swaps and inconsistencies its a must read.
K**D
Great read
Portia never fails to disappoint and the story was great. However definitely some errors in editing that caused me some confusion!Twist is as always a great addition but again seemed at odds with what the story told earlier in the book.Still a great read and well worth buying!
M**C
Lost me
This book didn't hold my interest. It's a shame as I have enjoyed this authors other novels.
P**E
Needs editing
There is a major error in the book, in one section we meet parents and then end up meeting the father?
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