His Mate and His Mistress: Rise of a Luna

I gave the book a three because I kept being pulled in. However, grammatically speaking it had a lot of raw parts. Also, sometimes the language didn’t seem as though it came from a well educated, royal wolf. It seemed very young at times. Other times it appeared the wolf man was as the book described, royal. If you are easily annoyed by language patterns consistently changing, this book series is not for you. Also, there are some hints of rape; so, if this speaks closely to an experience you’ve had or knew someone had, this book may not be for you.However, I appreciated the happily ever after. I appreciated the healing of two people. I appreciated that women weren’t considered weak. I also appreciated the mystical aspects. Also, I appreciated that the main wolves and their pack helped those who were less fortunate. I love wolves; so, I wanted to give the book a try. The author had a few stories to tell, and this book had multiple stories in it branching from every location. Truth be told, the author may even do some spin off series do to the amount of stories wrapped into this one. I’d just recommend some editing to be done prior to the release of any other ones.

I initially found this story on Facebook while going through my news feed and I read a few paragraphs and instantly was hooked so I ended up downloading an app I started reading the first book unfortunately the app I downloaded required you to buy coins I found myself spending money fun coins to open and unlock new chapters started to Google the book and realize that there was a second one but it was only to be bought through Amazon I was okay with that little did I know I read the dang thing in 4 hours. I lost track of time it's 3 a.m. and I have to wake up in 3 hours to start my day. Both books are good I got lost and both of them picturing myself as Adelina she reminds me a lot of myself somehow I felt that the story, was meant for me to overcome challenges to keep fighting but even if you get brutally hurt you still have the chance at true love. even with abuse. I could relate to the story so much it was insane I laughed I cried I was super into it my only issue is the grammatical errors. There were some moments where I got a little confused and I had to stop and slow down and reread. I noticed that a lot of people complained about that but that didn't stop me from buying the second book the errors didn't bother me because I could already guess what the offer was trying to portray. Just next time please proofread and fix the typos it's easier. I'm obsessed with the moon and wolves and most of my screen names have Luna in them and I have moons all in my house. I connected with the book . Anyway other than that great story, great read I'm just sad it's over now I don't know what to do.. lol

First of all, know that this review applies to the series and not just the second book. This isn't a book worth it's price, maybe if this was just a stand alone book instead of a two books series the $5.99 would be worth it. That being said I am completely guilty of paying said price knowing what I would got. This is a good enough concept, however it was not well executed, there were many grammar and spealing mistakes, not to mention some seriously misinformed affirmations. I'll make it short: I applauthe effort since I think the author is an independent writer who does her own editing and publishing, with the help of some ghost writers, but that is not an excuse to make a less than ok job, specially for a book this price.

Well, the grammar did not get any better with this book. We did reach an ending of Adelina and Demitrey's relationship and I'm not thrilled. The abuse that Adeline endures throughout a better part of the first book is explained away by Demitreys upbringing, and that's just not enough for me. Thought this book, we came Cross so many twists and turns, that the reasoning for them became repetitive, no one likes Adeline and she's somehow ruined everyone's lives. There isn't much else I can think of, the story really held my attention because of the storyline not being finished in the previous book, now I've gotten my answers and just met of an ending.

Truly regret reading this book. A lot of grammatical errors and ideas are poorly developed not worth 5.00

This review encompasses my thoughts on this book as well as the first installment of the two book series. The first book did capture my attention and I was excited to continue reading. It was an interesting story line and initially the characters showed depth and chemistry. That being said, over time the story line fell apart, I could no longer look past the blatant editing issues (misspellings, grammatical errors, duplicate words, incorrect sentence structures and sentences that didn't make any sense), and every character took on the same voice. The dialog was extremely childish and did not reflect the character development (which was weak to begin with). Quite often all the characters sounded like 12 year olds.Also, at first I found the changing point of views captivating and interesting to see things from many sides, however as you go you realize it is just a lazy way for the author to explain away things instead of working to fit details into the story line.I truly think this story could be amazing if it was re-edited and if the characters were pushed a bit more but it seems that this same type of review has been given time and time again and no further changes have been made.

I LOVE THIS BOOK 😍!! I wish they would make a movie about it. Yes there are some grammar errors, but it didn't bother me much because the story line/plot was so good. I was hooked. I seriously finished all 3 books in 3 days because I couldn't stop reading it. I haven't read a book in 10 years! I got hooked when I came acrossed it on Facebook, and then downloaded the Dreamie app to finish it, but when I finished the first book "His Mate & His Mistress" I couldn't find the next two books on Dreamie. So I searched on Amazon and I found them both and purchased all 3 books just incase I ever wanted to read them again, and also for my friends who like to read to enjoy. Right now my mom is reading the first one and she loves it too.

I finished this book in one day & I don’t really read all that often either, but I just couldn’t put it down. I took my time reading the first one because I didn’t want to finish it too quickly, I didn’t want it to be over & it WAS hard putting it down, but this one? I just couldn’t put it down!!I bought the 1st & 2nd book for £7.58 I think, on kindle edition so it was on my phone. I started reading the first book on an app called Dreame but had to pay for each chapter or wait, but I then found out it was on here, so I bought my first 2 kindle edition books without even questioning it. I have loved these 2 books. I fell in love with this story.I am a little confused though, as I thought there was a third book “His Mate & His Mistress: The Redemption of an Alpha”. It may not link into this story, but it was mentioned there would be a third book in the authors note of the first book. I can’t find it anywhere, so not sure if it’s still being written or not, but I would still love to read it; even if it isn’t linked to the main character in this story!!!!I have fell in love with these werewolf stories & these 2 books have made me realise that even more & now that I have finished them both, I need to find more like it!!! 🥰The only let down of this book, is that it wasn't “written well”, in the sense that there were words missing or jumbled up or the wrong word used, it didn’t bother me too much because I understood it most of the time. There was once or twice I had to re-read it to make sense which was a tiny bit irritating. But other than that, I loved it & still feel like it deserves 5*’s even with that in mind, it didn’t ruin the story. I know how emotional some people can get when there’s those sorta errors, as I’ve seen online about these books 🙄 but when you pay like £3.50-4 for a book & the story was as enticing as it was, I’m really not that fussed.

Good story on the face value, however, plenty of spelling and grammar mistakes. Too many mistakes to be honest.And what was that "third point of few", etc.In short good story completely destroyed by the lack of a proper editorial work.

I begrudgingly paid for this book as I just want to know the ending of Demitrey & Adelinas story! And for the love of god Would they after all this back & forth finally lock thier bedroom door & just have sex! But I actually couldn't finish the the book, so I guess I'll never know! It's all just too " Who?? what? When? All these new memorie's and people who supposedly played major parts in her life but we never knew anything about them in the whole of the first book? It's just to mind boggling. Theres absolutely no flow to the story and the plot seems a little too random. I just wanted to know the ending but I can't get through the book.

Reading is my passion, however, I have always stuck to the same female authors (call me biased but I prefer the female writing style and attention to detail) . I happened upon the first book in this series on another reading platform and although the book is not my usual choice I thought I'd give it a go. Blown away is an understatement! I was hooked by the end of the first chapter of the first book, hence why I'm here now writing this review. The writing style is a little rough around the edges and can do with some refining but hand on heart, Irtania Adrien has got what it takes to make it to the top and ultimately gain the respect and appreciation that she deserves as an author. Her passion is reflected in her writing and I hope that it long continues in further books. Give the series a go, you will not regret it

I have absolutely loved reading these two books. Really good characters and brilliant story lines. Every character has history and you feel like you know these people. I have enjoyed reading these books and recommend them as one of the best story's I have read so far. Couldn't put them down. Keep up the good work xxx