His Mate and His Mistress: Book 1

Alright so if you need a beta reader with honest critique and willingness to proofread and edit for you, please contact me. I'm happy to help.I'm not far into this and there are more grammatical and punctuation errors than I have fingers and toes to count.That being said, spoiler.The slap back was EVERYTHING. Ok. That's it.Will review more when complete.Also, I'd this isn't a full story as the first review stated, I'll be pretty freaking pissed and will demand a refund. If I am paying for something, it needs to be publish ready. This is not so far. Again, feel free to email me for beta reads. I am a junior in college and completed my BA in creative writing.

Even reading the few reviews that were posted, I decided that the book interested me enough to give it a try. I thought, how bad can it be? I can ignore spelling and grammar mistakes as long as the book is interesting. Well I was wrong. Apparently if there are enough errors, it will pull you out of the story.Now the story itself had potential. Unfortunately the further I read the more I realized it felt like a teenager was writing her first novel. Everything was unrealistic, from dialogue to the h being stubbornly stuck in the woe is me train, I was so ready for the story to be over. Another stickler is that it seems like every female she has met hates her. Why? I don’t know, it’s not like she has anything to be jealous about beside her strong right hook.As for the most abrupt ending I have ever read, I just don’t think I care enough to find out what happens, unless by some miracle this author hires a team of professionals to help her with her next book (not being mean but common get an editor) AND the reviews from other readers give me some hope that the once proud alpha grows his balls back and not contemplate jumping off a cliff just so that gal Sunday will smile again.

I thought the book would have finished the story but paying 5.99 for a book that is only part of the story is not for me. When I start reading a book I like to complete it. It should have been indicated on amazon that this book is the first part of a series or something.

I found this book on an APP called Dreme, the cover caught my attention, as well as the title. As I began to read, I noticed the grammar errors but I could not put it down. I ran out of coins to Continue reading the next chapter so I purchased the book on Amazon, even though it had a lot of bad reviews. Nonetheless, the story was great, yes there are a lot of different point of views and the writer repeats herself a bit. Regardless, it kept me intereared until the end. I read 418 pgs in 2 days without even thinking about it. I need to know how it ends. So Part 2 is on watt pad for free for those who wish to continue this adventure. Good job to the writer for putting your thoughts on paper and allowing others to enjoy a new adventure.

I wont go into detail to avoid potentially being mean to a child. This reads like it was written by a 12 year old, with no editing. Dont spend money on this. To the author: if you are as young as you sound you may have potential, but I think you should practice more on free sites before you publish again. Taking people's money for this amateur rough draft is a rip off.

This book has a story line that is extremely abusive toward women. It took the author 90% through the book to acknowledge the choking and slapping abuses. And there was only 1 acknowledgement to that having been done. Too many spelling and grammar errors. Liked the idea over all but for a man to love a woman and think it is okay to abuse her without it being consenual is wrong. And giving young women the idea this is acceptable is wrong.

It's a good story, however, it had not been edited and for 5.99 the author should have spent them time and effort to clean up the story. There was not change from what was published for free almost as if author decided people will read for free let me see if they will pay for it. I will not return the book even though it was too pricey for the product but unless she does a more professional job I won't be buying the next book in the series.

I gave this book two stars because it was a little confusing. Although it makes you want to know what happens. Your also left wondering where this is going and is it going to get more exciting. I like the charts but the main pair are really whine about everything. I do want to know what happens but I don't know if what I paid for this book was what I got from it.

This had the potential to be a really good book, the concept of the story sounded really good and definitely my kind of story. So it's a shame and really annoying that it was written by someone who has no idea how to tell a story. Spelling mistakes are all over it, there are plot holes and it's just plain stupid, I've just got to the half way point and had to stop reading because of how stupid it was getting. The only reason I got as far as I did with it is because of how much it cost and I was trying to get my moneys worth. Personally I think the "author" is a con artist, they churned this rubbish out in a day or two, made it sound good and charged us unsuspecting mugs nearly £5 for it.

One of the worst books I’ve ever read. The story didn’t flow well at all, so many cringe moments, none of the characters were likeable and had drastic personality changes throughout. In one chapter the main character describes a guy she’s just met, as the brother she never had, after having just one conversation with him. I eye rolled so many times during this book it made me dizzy. That’s without the spelling mistakes. Had real promise, but left me hugely disappointed. I finished the book only because I paid nearly £5 for it. Won’t be buying the second.

I started reading this story on an app called Dreame, it was a waiting for a free chapter story. I checked comments & seen I could buy it on Amazon. I found the first & second book on here for £7.58 for both of them (I didn’t know there was more than one). I am glad I bought them so I could carry on with the story. I loved this book, I read it within a few days because I was trying to not read it too quickly. I don’t read that often & these were the first kindle books I’ve bought. But anyone who likes werewolf films or books, I think, will love this. There’s so much tension and action. It makes you feel all sorts, especially the fire in your stomach when it gets a little... hot. There are some mistakes like missing words, words the wrong way around or the wrong word used. But that didn’t really bother me, i could still understand it. I still loved this book and can’t wait to read the second. I didn’t even know there was a third, makes it so much more exciting!!!!!! Can’t wait for the 3rd book to be available on Amazon, I really hope it will be available soon

This was a great story the story i loved BUT sadly no one has proof read this book. 1st great story 2nd great characters. I only have 3 stars because so many spelling mistakes also wrong worded sentences. It was very annoying having to re read 2 or 3 times trying to figure out what shou!d of been said. The most annoying thing was every section was headed 3 party point of view or whoever's point of view or "flashback". If written correctly there's no need for this the reader I knows who is talking and if the character is thinking back.so for these reasons i only give 3 stars. If it had been well written it would definitely gotten 5* as the story was great. I really want to read the next boomtown see what happens but I won't cause honestly with the way this story is so badly written its not worth the price. I've read a lot better books for cheaper sorry.

This could of been a great story but there was so may mistakes it not worth the money i had to pay for it. If only this author got someone to proof read it. The last part of the book just kept going round and round in circles (so annoying). Another thing why did Kat end up hating her? There was no reason behind it other then you need another spy. I hope you read this Irtania Adrien please get a couple of your friends to proof read your work then you don't have to pay someone to do it, but to be honest you could pay someone with how much you are charging for this book